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Donald Gordon
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Username: macaudonald

Post Number: 11
Registered: 11-2005
Posted on Monday, November 21, 2005 - 9:24 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

On the Road

Sleek, jet black
With a splash of white
Like the first evening star.

He arrived one Sunday.
As Small and perfectly formed
As a haiku.

Who we named after you.
For he was a lively one
That Jack.

Sat on the lap of an autumn evening,
He would needle the top of my legs
Like I imagined you had worked the keys
of your old type writer.

For like you
he was a poet
Who wrote his verse with the entrails of dead mice.
Stanzas carefully laid out on the kitchen floor.
Or sometimes set off live on our bed.
Little frightened poems that he pawed until dead.

Jack the wanderer,
Who found his road
on the paths and gardens
That snaked and laddered
their way up Rack Hill.



A watcher
Of the ebb and flow of the Village
That we were always destined to be outsiders to.

But never Jack.
Who climbed to the top of the telegraph pole in the road.

’Never seen a cat do that’ our neighbor said.
It was the first time she had spoken to us
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Zephyr
Senior Member
Username: zephyr

Post Number: 3212
Registered: 07-2003
Posted on Monday, November 21, 2005 - 10:05 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Hi Donald, being a cat person I loved this. We have several cats and yes...we did have a mouse in the bed a little field mouse and I was able to set it free! Not surprised about the telegraph pole, they like a good vantage point...and paragliding.

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