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Honorable Mention
An Unintended Interlude
Gary Blankenship

This was the most difficult to date. It took three versions before I found this one.

(The ninth in a series of transformations of Wang Wei’s River Wang poems.)

A River Transformed IX: After Wang Wei’s The Cornel Grove (7)

An Unintended Interlude

A sign flashes green – red; red – green:
O_en _losed O_en _losed O_en,
the café parking lot promises weeds
and gossip from a month old newspaper,
our destination beyond thistle fields
and crabapple hedges.

Leaden clay spatters the windshield,
wind pushes us towards an edge.
Our journey less than half over,
you will pour me the first cup
and argue that we can not outrun the storm.
I will shrug despite one shoulder’s pain.

Tipsy birds pass fruit from beak to beak,
each bead a suggestion of promises to come.

The literal translation from a web site.
Bear fruit red and green
Again as if flower further open
Hill at if remain guest
Place here cornel cup

http://www.chinese-poems.com/ww6.html

The fruit has been translated as dogwood berries. A cornel cup would be a cup made of dogwood. The poem has been titled Rivers of Dogwood, but is seldom translated.

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