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Thread Started By Posts Pages Last Post Jocular Youth J. Trismegistus 1  1  05-29-10  4:39 pm Hiss Cherryl E. Garner 3  1  05-29-10  4:47 pm irrigation A. Shoon 3  1  05-29-10  5:30 pm after words A. Shoon 3  1  05-29-10  10:13 am Vliet Steve Parker 9  1  05-29-10  4:23 pm After Running Over the Neighbor's Dog Fred Longworth 7  1  05-28-10  9:57 am Speak my mind Free MARLENE NOELIA COITI 3  1  05-27-10  9:38 am Elegy Written on a Country Road sue kay 7  1  05-28-10  3:52 pm VERY IMPORTANT INFO -- PLEASE READ! ~M~ & steve williams 1  1  05-20-10  8:33 am ecclesiae for Solomon Johnny McNugget 3  1  05-29-10  2:44 pm Bailey Street Gray Marion Alice Poirier 13  1  05-28-10  8:50 pm a well-insulated home can swallow most screams Jessie 6  1  05-15-10  5:41 pm Not As Promised Fred Longworth 16  1  05-28-10  4:28 pm Title Soufian Qarbal 9  1  05-25-10  5:17 pm The Last May Jessie 8  1  05-12-10  3:38 pm All that Remains Marion Alice Poirier 31  1  05-23-10  11:14 am My Neighbors: The Americans Alexander Vermitsky 10  1  05-24-10  4:16 am Mothers' Night laurie corzett 11  1  05-13-10  11:42 am The End of the World Alexander Vermitsky 5  1  05-10-10  3:44 pm The Politician Fred Longworth 7  1  05-13-10  10:21 pm traditional American tanka Marion Alice Poirier 9  1  05-10-10  9:06 pm British Style Tanka. Shavius. 13  1  05-10-10  9:23 pm British Haiku. Shavius. 16  1  05-11-10  5:03 am Pet Shops Jasper 8  1  05-09-10  8:18 pm Mouth Fred Longworth 11  1  05-09-10  8:04 pm A White Season Marion Alice Poirier 29  1  05-09-10  5:44 pm American haiku Marion Alice Poirier 8  1  05-15-10  6:40 pm haiku series Marion Alice Poirier 19  1  05-09-10  1:45 pm Senryu Jasper 5  1  05-08-10  3:02 pm Till Your Return (Terza Rima) Jasper 13  1  05-08-10  1:59 am To the Real sue kay 18  1  05-12-10  4:46 pm Avant la Lettre, a Poet Came – Two versions Shavius. 5  1  05-06-10  4:53 pm The Year ItalianBee 14  1  05-05-10  4:15 am Finding Style Magazine... (short) Alexander Vermitsky 7  1  05-04-10  10:36 pm “Panache” Life’s Fag Ash Poet. – Sonnet. Shavius. 10  1  05-04-10  2:13 am How It Happened Linda kowal 10  1  05-03-10  5:05 pm Juana Lawrence Pinck 2  1  05-03-10  10:06 am My Friend Alec. Shavius. 14  1  05-03-10  9:53 am As Twig Is Bent Jasper 28  1  05-03-10  3:36 am Small Reflecting Surfaces Variously Angled and Reshaped Alexander Vermitsky 7  1  05-02-10  12:13 pm Butt CE 10  1  05-01-10  11:41 pm Compétition Amour; Jeu Blanc and its Figurative Allusions. Shavius. 3  1  05-01-10  4:37 am Profiling Fred Longworth 10  1  05-01-10  12:42 am Be Cause (challenge poem) Derek Richards 4  1  04-30-10  5:05 pm Specter sarah craig 3  1  04-30-10  4:50 pm La Señorita que ella baila con Inchrory. Shavius. 4  1  04-30-10  4:19 pm The Elevator Fred Longworth 6  1  04-30-10  1:27 pm Love’s Wanderer Returns. Shavius. 1  1  04-30-10  7:18 am The Rainy Season LJ Cohen 34  1  04-29-10  10:17 am waterway Squeaky Monkey 6  1  04-29-10  9:16 am Spilt Milk/ another one from 09 Squeaky Monkey 2  1  04-28-10  10:10 am A note/ (last one i promise!)from 08 Squeaky Monkey 3  1  04-28-10  10:09 am The Orange /09 poem opting for critique Squeaky Monkey 3  1  04-28-10  10:06 am Deaf Man’s Poetry and the Artist Blind. Free Verse. Shavius. 32  1  04-27-10  8:30 pm A Geordie Seafarer. Lyrical composition. Shavius. 6  1  04-26-10  11:17 pm respite laurie corzett 9  1  04-26-10  2:17 pm Postcards from Brenda's (1) brenda morisse 16  1  04-26-10  6:39 am The Meaning of Life Alexander Vermitsky 2  1  04-26-10  5:33 am Urban Renewal Fred Longworth 7  1  04-24-10  5:30 pm might as well Jason Currier 3  1  04-24-10  5:11 pm In the End Linda kowal 20  1  04-23-10  7:40 pm On Watching "Life" on Discovery Nancy Lazar 6  1  04-22-10  3:57 pm Trust the Reader Fred Longworth 7  1  04-22-10  1:35 pm 26 Doubtful Forms Alexander Vermitsky 5  1  04-22-10  7:55 am What God Looks Like Alexander Vermitsky 3  1  04-22-10  6:56 am Spring LJ Cohen 11  1  04-22-10  6:31 am Road Work sue kay 11  1  04-21-10  4:14 pm Naani, a new and popular Indian style poetry. Shavius. 8  1  04-21-10  5:41 am White House Sandwich Blues Les Keress 6  1  04-20-10  9:31 pm Metaphoric Stepping-Stones - Post Modern Free Verse. Shavius. 1  1  04-20-10  7:18 am Rapture Borska 4  1  04-20-10  3:54 am The Scouse Poet, we met in Haworth. -In Two Parts. Shavius. 1  1  04-18-10  11:36 am Just Say "Woof" Fred Longworth 5  1  04-18-10  10:38 am A Recycled Tale Fred Longworth 10  1  04-17-10  9:08 am The unnamed Poet who Left us. Metrical Free Verse. Shavius. 7  1  04-15-10  4:38 pm The Caecus Dance of Dreams. Shavius. 1  1  04-15-10  8:37 am Visitor Fred Longworth 21  1  04-15-10  5:55 am Dark Sonnet VII CE 19  1  04-14-10  8:28 pm “Look at me”, the Poet Said. Shaw O' Inchrory 21  1  04-13-10  6:49 am Trio (2) Mostafa Youssef 2  1  04-12-10  10:16 pm Time keeps on slippin’ slippin’ into the future home of Mrs. Karen ... Alexander Vermitsky 2  1  04-12-10  10:11 pm The Baptism Stephanie Broadbent 10  1  04-12-10  9:36 pm Route 9 to Harper’s Ferry Mark Becker 16  1  04-12-10  4:35 pm Guesses emad 7  1  04-12-10  10:37 am Train Wreck Judi Brannan Armbrus 9  1  04-12-10  9:25 am Le Poète Critique. Un Sonnet Moderne. Shaw O' Inchrory 12  1  04-11-10  10:34 pm still working at sonnets -- it's a learning experience Hephaestes 4  1  04-10-10  5:25 pm From Dark Sonnets CE 39  1  04-09-10  2:27 am Pandemic Jasper 6  1  04-08-10  10:11 pm Well (Counterfactual) Richard M 9  1  04-08-10  7:21 pm Sonnets for Julie Hephaestes 20  1  04-07-10  8:07 am You're Thomas Nonya 6  1  04-07-10  7:06 am Mini-festo Fred Longworth 6  1  04-07-10  6:38 am Shema! Emusing 19  1  04-06-10  10:17 am Seminary Moi Diane 3  1  04-04-10  9:02 pm From Recollections of Early Childhood Fred Longworth 8  1  04-03-10  4:23 am Zipper Richard M 7  1  04-02-10  3:38 pm Lumens Fred Longworth 5  1  03-31-10  6:30 pm Ocean City, New Jersey Matt Britton 3  1  03-31-10  3:18 pm Build Soufian Qarbal 3  1  03-31-10  11:24 am Before You Save the World, Read This Fred Longworth 7  1  03-30-10  6:58 pm Condiments Robert M Dilley 4  1  03-29-10  4:03 pm We Have Gone Nathan Landau 5  1  03-29-10  11:41 am I was told to build the nest Natalie 4  1  03-29-10  10:30 am My Endymion Thomas Nonya 8  1  03-29-10  8:48 am Lust Richard M 8  1  03-28-10  1:54 am untitled Matt Britton 7  1  03-27-10  6:05 pm When I'm Ninety-Four Fred Longworth 5  1  03-26-10  5:03 am The Flotation Device David Randall 6  1  03-25-10  11:09 pm Mother Taught Me luke carmignani 3  1  03-25-10  11:05 pm solitude allison teague 4  1  03-25-10  9:53 am Why I Do Not Trust the Reader Fred Longworth 13  1  03-24-10  10:28 pm Trapped in Ice GA Sunshine 7  1  03-24-10  6:35 pm Zed says we savages Natalie 8  1  03-24-10  12:12 pm To the Fetus Fred Longworth 22  1  03-23-10  5:35 pm Fifth Anniversary Thomas Nonya 10  1  03-23-10  12:00 am Time Frame Rashmi 5  1  03-22-10  12:30 pm Run of Luck Fred Longworth 23  1  03-22-10  5:15 am Entropy Fred Longworth 12  1  03-21-10  6:45 pm The Crazy Club Fred Longworth 5  1  03-21-10  6:12 pm Who Art in Heaven M. A. O'Brien 7  1  03-21-10  1:15 pm Drink This, Bitch Jasper 18  1  03-20-10  6:46 pm Escapes Robert M Dilley 6  1  03-20-10  6:39 pm According to BBC World News RGCat 4  1  03-20-10  11:28 am Cosmological Constant Love Theory popova 10  1  03-20-10  9:21 am Notebook Borska 15  1  03-20-10  6:25 am The Line is Fine Save For Repression's Digressions CE 4  1  03-19-10  9:03 pm The House Sandor's Built reposted 2nd version Les Keress 2  1  03-18-10  4:03 pm a nerve Matt Britton 7  1  03-17-10  9:51 pm Night Scene Emusing 13  1  03-17-10  7:17 pm The Sands Robert M Dilley 3  1  03-17-10  6:18 pm Laura Chavez at the Verve Lounge popova 12  1  03-17-10  5:12 pm For The Love of Family Derek Richards 12  1  03-17-10  2:53 pm Killing You Softly with My Song Fred Longworth 16  1  03-17-10  9:39 am ola A. Shoon 6  1  03-17-10  3:59 am One, Two, Three, Four, Five Andrew Dufresne 8  1  03-16-10  9:24 am Eurydice Ron. Lavalette 23  1  03-15-10  8:45 pm Good News CE 21  1  03-15-10  4:24 pm One, Two, Three, Four, Five Andrew Dufresne 1  1  03-15-10  10:08 am Raw Dusk Ryan Zastowney 10  1  03-14-10  3:14 pm Blackout Thomas Nonya 10  1  03-14-10  8:25 am I Reclaim LJ Cohen 8  1  03-13-10  7:46 pm 2 Sonnets M. A. O'Brien 4  1  03-13-10  4:45 pm cycles Mark Becker 7  1  03-13-10  10:39 am Pep Talk M. A. O'Brien 2  1  03-13-10  10:26 am Messier Objects popova 17  1  03-12-10  10:57 pm Isn't G.U.I. grand Robert M Dilley 12  1  03-11-10  5:12 pm S.O.S. Earth Kimberly Roundtree 3  1  03-11-10  1:18 pm Listening Eric Lester 12  1  03-10-10  8:10 pm Sparrow pam joseph 6  1  03-10-10  8:08 pm Moving My Lines Mark Becker 15  1  03-10-10  7:51 pm Anna Tina Hoffman 2  1  03-10-10  7:45 pm To One Whose Ointment Has No Flies Fred Longworth 17  1  03-10-10  1:53 pm Domestic penance Robert M Dilley 7  1  03-10-10  8:57 am Influx of vacuum Robert M Dilley 4  1  03-10-10  8:26 am Anger Management M. A. O'Brien 8  1  03-10-10  12:47 am Five Miniatures in Loose Orbits around Legacy Fred Longworth 6  1  03-09-10  6:47 pm To Tunnel (Termite Thoughts) Hephaestes 9  1  03-09-10  6:38 pm (Revised) When He's Sixty-Four Ron. Lavalette 9  1  03-09-10  12:19 pm The Bird Watcher CJC 5  1  03-08-10  2:35 am Safety Net CE 26  1  03-07-10  5:45 pm During The Off-Season Derek Richards 10  1  03-06-10  6:11 pm Unsealing the Records LJ Cohen 20  1  03-05-10  6:44 pm November’s Spanish relation CJC 13  1  03-04-10  1:38 pm Magda's Magnum Opus Jasper 8  1  03-04-10  1:17 pm If we did not love our children Richard M 16  1  03-04-10  9:39 am The House Sandor's Built Les Keress 3  1  03-04-10  8:20 am Star! Star! Star! Fred Longworth 13  1  03-02-10  8:18 pm he last recorded incident of Rubik's cube sticker removal as a mean... Alexander Vermitsky 6  1  03-02-10  3:23 pm Coffee Grounds on the Bottom of a Chipped Mug LJ Cohen 19  1  03-02-10  1:01 pm American Dream Fred Longworth 12  1  03-02-10  12:30 pm Temples With Axe Problems Alexander Vermitsky 2  1  03-02-10  12:04 pm Poem Without an I popova 24  1  03-02-10  10:46 am 2 spatial orientations, one equally north or south, one south-north... popova 7  1  03-01-10  2:24 pm Love confused Robert M Dilley 7  1  03-01-10  2:09 pm provincial concerns and the recognition that Patrick Swayze is not ... Alexander Vermitsky 3  1  03-01-10  2:01 pm Counterfactual IV - My Father's Guitar Richard M 9  1  03-01-10  6:44 am The ghost writer CJC 19  1  03-01-10  3:32 am En el Pais de Mi Abuelo Nochipa 13  1  03-01-10  3:12 am Since we have a lot of new posters in BFB LJ Cohen 5  1  02-28-10  4:04 pm Haiku Jasper 15  1  02-28-10  3:19 pm It Won't Matter Borska 15  1  02-28-10  5:23 am The Fifth Law of Thermodynamics Fred Longworth 7  1  02-27-10  7:03 pm Humanity Linda kowal 11  1  02-27-10  6:48 pm Totem sue kay 14  1  02-27-10  1:52 pm When I Handle Time Fred Longworth 16  1  02-26-10  10:50 pm September's winter CJC 17  1  02-26-10  10:11 pm Mexican Stories, Hillbilly Hearts Nochipa 28  1  02-26-10  5:32 am 21st century Aeneid Johnny McNugget 3  1  02-25-10  9:54 pm Outside the Operating Room Borska 3  1  02-25-10  7:06 pm Key of Octet Seraphim? Johnny McNugget 1  1  02-25-10  4:19 pm Time Travel Sheri perry 7  1  02-25-10  1:43 pm Counterfactuals, III Richard M 15  1  02-25-10  7:18 am Even Better CE 14  1  02-25-10  12:56 am rinse (after brainwashing) jeff martin 9  1  02-24-10  3:37 pm Storm Warnings LJ Cohen 9  1  02-24-10  1:18 pm If you had only been saying hello Richard M 1  1  02-24-10  12:44 pm Feathered Spells Nochipa 6  1  02-24-10  9:18 am Funk Minwook Bae 7  1  02-24-10  4:47 am Pressed Flowers. sarah craig 11  1  02-23-10  12:45 pm a snail of a tale popova 16  1  02-23-10  10:11 am Rave Ivy Knight 14  1  02-23-10  8:17 am "Vert-Gork" Johnny McNugget 7  1  02-21-10  11:10 am Raving Fetus-Snail.. Johnny McNugget 4  1  02-21-10  11:06 am love is linus 20  1  02-21-10  7:27 am Unnamed By Billions Ivy Knight 12  1  02-17-10  1:23 pm Her Memory of You Ivy Knight 3  1  02-17-10  1:14 pm Lover Richard M 8  1  02-17-10  5:52 am when you told me popova 15  1  02-16-10  8:24 pm What's What Is What Fred Longworth 5  1  02-16-10  4:52 pm Originality Fred Longworth 7  1  02-16-10  10:01 am 2 A M Judy Thompson 11  1  02-16-10  8:10 am Whispers of a cat. Shen Mu 7  1  02-15-10  10:46 pm A Fly Knows Les Keress 4  1  02-15-10  10:35 pm Medieval Funeral (a Poem) Lon R. Bruso 6  1  02-15-10  10:20 pm wormwood Johnny McNugget 7  1  02-15-10  10:12 pm face of vague Johnny McNugget 3  1  02-15-10  12:48 am Canyon Song Judi Brannan Armbrus 12  1  02-14-10  7:11 pm Amir Jack Reagan 5  1  02-14-10  1:37 pm The Oven (nounless poem) popova 7  1  02-14-10  1:33 am female novelist takes the sideways tour popova 5  1  02-13-10  10:52 pm 4 July- Near Kalay Jack Reagan 3  1  02-13-10  10:06 pm Alice's Kitchen Geraldine Miller 20  1  02-13-10  6:52 pm A Soldier's Story Linda kowal 9  1  02-13-10  4:29 pm Iowa City Poets Les Keress 3  1  02-13-10  11:49 am nevermore jeff martin 8  1  02-13-10  7:34 am Wonder Years Linda kowal 21  1  02-12-10  1:43 pm The High Desert, Looking Back Jack Reagan 3  1  02-12-10  1:23 pm Schenectady Eric Lester 14  1  02-12-10  1:12 pm Paradigm Andrew Dufresne 3  1  02-12-10  12:43 pm Just look at the view! Robert M Dilley 5  1  02-11-10  3:17 pm Coda Fred Longworth 12  1  02-10-10  1:01 pm Snake's Head, South Jack Reagan 6  1  02-10-10  10:16 am Without Honey Les Keress 3  1  02-10-10  10:10 am mother chocolate Derek Richards 15  1  02-10-10  7:39 am Cluster Joe 6  1  02-10-10  12:12 am Longing Andrew Dufresne 12  1  02-09-10  6:59 pm The Main Meal CJ 6  1  02-08-10  12:18 pm Your Smile Les Keress 5  1  02-08-10  12:02 pm Before Linda kowal 5  1  02-08-10  11:48 am Kalay at Night Jack Reagan 5  1  02-08-10  8:09 am Concerned Friend Feeling Sorta Heavy Tina Hoffman 3  1  02-08-10  1:21 am Dear Self Joe 17  1  02-07-10  7:11 pm Shinobi's Game Jasper 12  1  02-06-10  5:01 pm taking another shot Judi Brannan Armbrus 13  1  02-06-10  3:29 pm Respite Fred Longworth 14  1  02-06-10  1:55 am If I leave with you Matt Britton 6  1  02-05-10  5:39 pm we must get sentimental Matt Britton 5  1  02-05-10  5:08 pm Bully Fred Longworth 10  1  02-05-10  3:38 pm Helpless A. 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