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Laura Ring
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Username: laura

Post Number: 62
Registered: 05-2007
Posted on Thursday, May 31, 2007 - 4:16 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Hi Everyone,

Does anyone else ever feel this way?

You've got an hour or so free, and you think, "well, I could write a new poem, or I could revise one," which is to say: "I could spend a glorious hour allowing myself to be overcome with new images, feel the rush of discovery as I channel the muse" OR "I could cut pieces of my heart out with a splintered awl"...

Does revising one's poetry ever get easier?

Laura
LJ Cohen
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Username: ljc

Post Number: 7415
Registered: 07-2002
Posted on Thursday, May 31, 2007 - 5:02 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

ROFL, laura. I may be an odd duck, but I actually like revising. I think I'm a better editor than I am a poet. :-)

BUT I usually need some separation from the piece to be effective in revising it. Sometimes a day or two will do. With other poems, it may be months or longer before I can see it as separate from me.

I like to look at revision as "re Vision". Looking at the words in a different way, rather than seeing it as a destructive process.

Where I get tripped up is in my fiction. I *love* planning a story and the rush of new writing at the start. Middles. I LOATHE middles.

LOL.

ljc
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Fred Longworth
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Username: sandiegopoet

Post Number: 1450
Registered: 05-2006
Posted on Friday, June 01, 2007 - 1:23 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Although I suck as an editor because I get carried away and make MAJOR changes in the person's poem, which inevitably crushes their ego and offends them mightily and causes them to chase me through the town with tar and feathers . . . in every other way I agree with what Lisa said.

It's good to have a stack of poems that are "in progress." Place the recent ones on top, so that its easy to append comments, say, from Biofeedback or Creative Visualization, and to make immediate corrections of typos and other obvious stuff. But pull poems off the bottom of the stack for deeper revision.

And I cannot stress this point more highly: at the same time you revise a few of your own poems, read a number of other poets' works.

Fred
Laura Ring
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Username: laura

Post Number: 63
Registered: 05-2007
Posted on Friday, June 01, 2007 - 6:01 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Thank you, LJ and Fred, for your advice. I can tell that I'm learning so much by witnessing the process of revision for others (and by participating in giving feedback). Part of it, I think, is that revising a poem involves such a different level of commitment than writing one, if that makes sense. But getting a little distance from the poem first sounds like a good idea.
(Now, where's that awl...?)
Cheers,
Laura